” … THANKFULLY, THERE’S GRAMMARLY!”
Oh. My. Goodness. Do you want to know how not to write? When a bunch of algorithms tell you your sentences run or you’re using PASSIVE VOICE. OH NO. Passive voice. I should write an entire book in “passive voice” just to prove my point. GOOD writing – the kind that sometimes spills out of you (if you’re a lucky ducky!) and rarely follows mandates or dictates or any sort of must-be-like-this-ates – is the articulation of memory in every sense of the word; remembering every sense by utilizing strings of words that BEST REPRESENT VERY SPECIFIC AND VERY VAGUE IDEAS … and making the images such words conjure in the minds of readers magically elicit the actual FEELING of universal feelings, experiences, and values (the “collective consciousness,” if you will) all within a completely intangible non-spatiotemporal “place.”
“My mother is a fish.”
Okay, so that’s not a poorly written sentence. But I think you get my idea. I just had to vent with all these ads … it surely seems like Grammarly is not hurting for business, at any rate!
Sweet dreams, lovies.
❤ Always, Beth
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I have been living with chronic illness since I was 2 months old. My first "formal" chronic illness diagnosis was Behçet's Disease - I was 17 at the time. I was later diagnosed with Common Variable Immune Deficiency (I more or less led the doctors to that diagnosis - that story is for another time!) and those have been my "primary" two illnesses. I have many other "secondary" diagnoses such as seronegative Rheumatoid Arthritis, Chiari 1 Malformation (a result, I believe, of the Behçet's causing aseptic meningitis time and again since it had never appeared in brain scans before I was about 24-25), osteoporosis, compression fractures of the thoracic spine, and many others. I know what it is like to feel as if you have lost years of your life that you can never recover from illness and the many restrictions it places upon you in your everyday life. I just want you to know that I know what it is like and I have been there through every period of my life - you are NOT ALONE! Please do not hesitate to contact me if you ever need someone to talk with or someone just to listen to you - I am always here! Thank you for taking the time to read this and my other posts and I hope you are having a happy and healthy day no matter where you are in the world! Take care.
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